I'm in the process of writing my grad school (statement of purpose) admissions essay. I would LOVE it if someone wanted to give me their thoughts/feedback/etc. No big deal, you don't have to be particularly qualified to give essay advice or anything, I'd just like to hear other perspectives on it. Let me know if you're willing to look it over for me and I'll pm it to you. (I'll probably post it on here after my applications have gone through, but I don't want it floating around on the internet before my applications are filed.) Thanks in advance!